A New Journey on the Cards(Thursday Poets Rally)

Woha! Here is my chance of shooting to fame (hehehehe,,i am still a self proclaimed poet,,no one else thinks that i am actually one 😛 :D)

Sweet Jingle has this Thursday Poets rally at her blog ,,a must for upcoming bloggers,looking out for making some great friends having similar interests ..

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/21/thursday-poets-rally-week-15-april-22-28-2010/

so here’s my entry (first one ) for the rally…and yeah I wrote this one for one of my friends.She just got placed…Whoa whoa,,

A new journey on the cards..

full of enthusiasm you are..

morosity is far apart

searching your life..you move forward.

***

As a princess,now you shine,,

Life appears to be sublime.

full of adventures is your new world..

May you glide through like a bird..

***

A thought of happiness

and a feeling of bliss

may follow you,,

O lovely miss…

P.S. As far as I remember this is only my second attempt at writing a poem in English(i generally write in hindi)

Last time I wrote in English ,,was i think in third or fifth standard in school

“Bird can fly,

Penguin can fly,,

why can’t i fly”

Ahhh yaar Penguins don’t fly or do they ,,,see i am still confused

Anywayz waiting for your comments ,,,

“Don’t wanna say see ya

can’t say Hee ya..

so i think Ma Ma mia will do”

Bad PJ..hehe

26 thoughts on “A New Journey on the Cards(Thursday Poets Rally)”

  1. Amazing job,
    love the photo
    which matches the poem nicely,
    what a fitting poem!

    hope that you have fun!

  2. Greetings from Jingle.
    please visit 12 participants who are in my list as your first time assignment…
    Best wishes…

    let them know your know so that they give you feedback!
    😉

  3. Good try @ English! But I am curious at what you meant by “morosity” because that’s not an English word.

  4. hello friend, thanks for coming over to my blog, and it is nice to meet a NEW friend, this poem was lovely, you really have a way with words, bravo..:)

  5. glad you joined the rally this week….for only your second poem in english you did mighty well…nice flow of emotions…cool opportunity for your friend. hope she reads your encouragement.

  6. Thanks for directing me your way. I’m impressed – I struggle writing in English
    glad you have joined the poets rally – a good group and you will get alot more views

    I know I will see you soon

    keep writing

    P.S. I am always interested in spotlighting poets (especially when you are just starting out) just give me a shout at my blog site or email me

  7. From your comments, I take it that English is not your first language. However, you would not know that from your poem…excellent!Soundl like your friend is starting a lovely adventure. And by the way, penquins don’t fly, just to end your confusion. you write well.

  8. aaww…that was a very cute poem..
    im sure the “lovely miss” loved it too 🙂
    it was simple and endearing…
    you proved it that:
    poems ke liye bhaari shabdo ki nahi bhavnaao ki zarurat hai 😀
    bole tho ekkdum jhakaas…!!!

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